
The writing syle of the book seemed clunky at first, with too many sentences in the style of "Not that there's anything wrong with that", multiple insteads and althoughs in a single sentence and other clunkers.
But things smoothed out in the later parts of the book and it turned into a really sweet story of a socially awkward duke (who lost an eye in a silly accident) and a woman who was cast off by her parents and has to make her own way in the world.